Every poem I post here is a draft, and usually a very early draft. I'm still learning how to look at them objectively, and when it comes to fixing what's broken or just non-functioning, ...whew.
I don't ask for formal critique--that's a lot of work. But if you notice anything you think might help a poem (spelling and punctuation, too), please don't hesitate to mention it. In the comments, that's fine, or drop me a note: briarcat at gmail.
Be good, take care
OK I’m probably in the middle of some river on some precarious stepping stones … but…”dropping appreciation notes into DropBox”….
Glad I could help in the ‘Why didn’t I think of that? Depo…
I’m here if you want to ‘chat’ JulesPaige57(at)gmail(dot)com
Seriously, I want to know when you see something that will improve the poems. Spelling, punctuation, turning things inside out... Cancel reply
OK I’m probably in the middle of some river on some precarious stepping stones … but…”dropping appreciation notes into DropBox”….
Glad I could help in the ‘Why didn’t I think of that? Depo…
I’m here if you want to ‘chat’ JulesPaige57(at)gmail(dot)com