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When it is not spring

Nathan Gatewelder Longs for Spring

“which in our case we have not got”*

Nathan Gatewelder put away childish things
became a member in good standing, an adult
with sensible shirts and foolish ones, and a dog,
white with brown splotches, who came whenever called.

But, in the summer
Nathan longed for spring

He moved from an apartment to a brick house
with an attached garage, a green lawn mower,
a small maple tree with fringed plum copper leaves,
and an attic filled with someone else’s past.

And in the winter
Nathan longed for spring

Nathan built a deck with a stone-lined fire pit,
a chiminea, and a big propane grill.
He invited friends from work to parties,
and married a woman with two small children.

Yet, still, in the fall
Nathan longed for spring

when life is restless
and carbonated
and a man may be
excused for wanting
to stand in the wind
holding a red kite.

______________________________

Asked to write a poem based on a favorite line
from a favorite poem by a favorite poet
, I chose
this one, though, I, in honesty, only love this one
sad, funny poem of Henry Reed’s.

Naming of Parts by Henry Reed*

………The branches
Hold in the gardens their silent, eloquent gestures,
Which in our case we have not got.

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8 comments on “When it is not spring

  1. smiles. i tend to long for spring…and autumn which is truly my favorite…

  2. spring is my favorite season of the year…this write was so enjoyable…very nicely crafted…i must say i quite like your Nathan Gatewelder..

    • Never met a Gatewelder I didn’t like.
      Nathan appeared the other day as we were driving through south-central Kentucky. Has a father named John, but he’s a bit stiff about the hinges.

  3. This was different, and I liked that. That last stanza kind of choked me up a bit. I want to know more about Nathan…

  4. I’m with Brian & Claudia. Spring & autumn are my favorite seasons. Summer’s too hot & winter’s too dark & snowy.

    Thanks for sharing.

    Here’s mine:
    http://mypoetcharm.blogspot.com/2011/01/introduce-me-to-your-emotions.html

  5. Spring is always a fresh welcome :) nice!

  6. Yeah spring and autumn tend to be the best, although summer I won’t detest. Great capture of the season with your words.

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